I trample through the woodland area, trying to find a premiere location for my fort. I also kept a sharp eye out for fallen down trees and branches that I could use. I stumbled up upon a chicken-wire fence. I tried to think of a use for it, I could make a wall, or a ceiling with it, maybe even tie some logs together. I dug in my pocket for my switchblade knife. I brought it out and opened up the wire cutters. Slowly, I snapped links of the fence until finally I had broken a fair-sized piece off. I strapped it to my backpack, and kept walking. Soon enough I came to a tree. It was slumped over, with a few braches reaching for the ground. I gather up some sticks and my chicken wire, and started to make my hideout. Soon I had built a wall across the front ant I piled up some leaves that I could sleep on. I was so exhausted that I curled up on my pile, and slept.
I really liked the use of the words of trampled and when you described how the branches reached for the ground.
ReplyDeleteJust a question, why were you building a fort? Just to play in it in your free time?
Yes, I have a woods in my backyard, and I often enjoy building forts I can play around in.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you told step by step what you did. I think you described things pretty well with words like "Premier, sharp eye out, trampled, woodland area, and slumped over." I also liked the way it ended with you goind to sleep.
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